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Seyelia Isis the Executioner

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When the crime is committed and the Lord God does not take vengeance nor does the exalted State move to declare and then to be punish, when these bitter events happen, there only comes the time for the executioner to declare himself or herself as the case may be. When judgement is called I shall be your executioner.

OC Seyelia Isis

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Photoshop CS5

Okay is finish now XD

Cheer!! Enjoy
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Lovely character design, exciting colors, and a dramatic pose. While she gives off a magical girl-vibe, she also has her own unique style.

The background and colors are bright and bring attention to the piece, but they also take away from the main character, which should have more of the spotlight. The background makes some of her outfit fade, and intentional or not, it doesn't give her actual design the attention it should have. The pink and gold theme has been seen before in magical girls or simply character designs, but your addition of other colors, such as the blue and gray, adds a more unique palette.

Laces and ribbons flying everywhere really helps capture the movement shown in the piece, and shows that she may currently be in a battle scene (and you should probably get out of the way!).

From what can be seen, her anatomy seems correct and her posture does show that she's currently in attack mode with her shoulders being tense. Her legs look like they're in a position that wouldn't be able to support the body, with her completely leaning forward on one foot while the other is close underneath her. If anyone tried this position, they would fall. Of course, it's harder to see what's going on past her lower hips, making it harder to critique exactly what's going on.

All in all, this is a lovely piece that has wonderful elements, and a well-designed character. I hope I was able to give constructive advice~!